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Friday, 31 March 2017

LJ And Vuni - Explanation: How to show Manaakitanga to our environment.

EXPLANATION WRITING
Introducing the S.E.E. structure
S
Statement - Use a starter sentence to state a cause - To be a great Tamaki student, you need to...
E
Explain - Define the cause - this means . . .
E
Evidence - explain the effect of the cause - if you do that then . . .

Make sure you USE YOUR PLAN to help guide your writing!
Title
What is your explanation topic about?
How can we show Manaakitanga to our environment?
Introduction
What are you going to explain? Write 2 facts about the topic.

Suggestion:
  • 1 fact about the the importance of Manaakitanga.
  • 1 fact about the Tamaki environment.
We Show Manaakitanga to the environment by caring about the waters and the people . Tamaki  Includes , Glen Innes , Panmure and in G.I .There are Different cultures are around here that share the environment
Paragraph One
S - State your first key idea
E - Explain and elaborate on your key idea.
E - provide examples that relate to your key idea.
Pick Up Rubbish In your Streams , Lakes , Rivers and on land in your neighbourhood . For Example , People should start caring for the land as well .And to back it up , Start bringing people together for the clean up . The more people there is , the faster it can end
Paragraph Two
S - State your first key idea
E - Explain and elaborate on your key idea.
E - provide examples that relate to your key idea.
Help in the community and stop pollution . For Example , we should start looking for rubbish and start caring for the environment . To Back It up , Get more people to help so the waterways become healthier .
Paragraph Three
S - State your first key idea
E - Explain and elaborate on your key idea.
E - provide examples that relate to your key idea.
Create a poster that warns people about what is going on and get them to help . For Example , Create more than one poster , so everyone gets the message that we’re trying to send .To back it up , Warn people about what is happening around the world about pollution .
Conclusion
The conclusion sums up all the ideas and repeats a key message to end.  This could be a recommendation or a personal connection.
A Healthy Environment : Finally , if all goes well , we’ll be living in a healthy environment suitable for wildlife as well as us because of the people’s contribution to the cleanup .

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