Persuasive Writing Framework
Persuasive Writing Topic and Task
It is wrong to fight
What do you think? Do you agree or disagree? Are there ideas to support both sides of this topic?
Write to persuade your reader of your ideas.
Think about:
what your reader needs to know about the topic
how you are going to introduce the topic the order of your ideas and how you link them what to include in your summary.
Planning for persuasive writing
Example of persuasive writing
Persuasive writing phrases and sentence starters
Statement
It is wrong to fight
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Introduction:
Introduce the topic by stating your opinion
It is wrong to fight because some fights aren’t even for one single reason such as drinking.
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Reason #1
1- State your first reason
2 - Support your reason with an example
My most important reason is because some fights occur even when they’re not supposed to because some can happen on late nights and some can happen because of gang wars or something like that ..
I think that because
Some fights on T.V are like U.F.C but they’re a payed respective company so they’re paid to fight . But fights like these have no reason at all . Some of these fights are of late night outs some fights are so severe, It leaves them with blood all over their own body , even broken body parts .
For example,
There was this one guy who one punch killed another person he didn’t even know and after the family had just found out a few days later ,the family was filled with deep sadness and anger , Also the person killed was a loner but he didn’t care he would always travel .He even made his own 2 surfboards called the “Voyager” . The killer was sentenced to 22 months in jail , But the family feared this wasn’t enough they either wanted life or at least 8 years in prison. They also feared that he might return and hunt down people because of this sentence.
Reason #2
1- State your second reason
2 - Support your reason with an example
My Second reason is because there are different types of fights ,
For Example. Mocking Family members/friends,
No reason at all , and play fighting turns real .
Most fights are caused because when people are way too drunk , they’ll fight someone that they don’t know for no random reason. These aren’t even reasons to fight . Fights are real out of control actually no way near control once it gets way too far. Fights can accel real quickly and you might involve your family in it and you know what’s weird ? some people say it .
For example :
When you involve your family and you say you’ll bring your family and then....
The next day nothing even happens ! and they don’t even come because they have work ! or the next day or the next . And after that you might forget that you even wanted to involve your family . But then you wouldn’t really care would you ? . You’d just do it yourself and take “ Care “ of it yourself .
Reason #3
1- State your third reason
2 - Support your reason with an example
My third reason is because fighting can be used for defense if you are in very big trouble in the streets that’s why some people have to learn techniques in school programs or such places like a gym or a boxing training centre to learn how to defend yourself in a fight when you’ve found yourself cornered in the street . In the street no one uses fair tactics really , . So you have to stand up for yourself using fighting skills but if you don’t have any skills well ... you get an alternative ending to death .
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Opinion
Summarise your argument by restating your opinion
My Opinion is that fighting is a fair tactic in life , but it can be used in bad ways although i’ve might have repeated this it needs to be permanent out there to everyone in the world in families , streets , neighbourhoods even nightclubs and pubs.
What do I think about this piece of persuasive writing?
I think that it is pretty good and it has a reason on why fighting can be used for good and not for bad . It can be used for defence when you're caught in something you shouldn’t be in somewhere real bad.
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