My Narrative Writing Using TIDES - LJ

Narrative Writing Framework I am learning to create a narrative based on an image.

Reminders:

• Narrative writing prompts

Title Give your story a captivating title!	Nature's Darkness
Introduction Who? Characters - describe your characters in detail. What? What is happening? What is the situation? What is happening to your characters? What are they doing? What are they saying? When? When is your story set? Where? Describe the setting of your story	California , Los Angeles - Many have chosen never to go to the forest at night for there awaits deadly beasts in their path through and out of it  many have dared but had never come back  with family and friends fearing that they were dead by the one strike of an animal or something even worse the nature queen herself  Mother nature . When darkness rises the light falls and mother nature is consumed by darkness herself   and nature but two people never fears  anything - Loyz and Dynex. Loyz would always be the happy one all the time and Dynex would be the serious one.  Both were never really afraid of anything at scary situations like this . His face is so serious that he barely smiles everywhere  even at the most funny things everyone always seen . (They’re basically opposites of each other) Sad and Happy .
Dilemma What is the cause of the problem? What are the characters doing? Have you describe their feelings? Include language features to support key ideas. Simile Metaphors Onomatopoeia Personification Include some engaging  dialogue in your story. “ “	Light shun only through the day to free mother nature from her darkness but only at a short time coming . When it hit the night Loyz and Dynex knew what to do when it hit the final night of winter the 31st of august . As the final night struck they knew they had to do something to free the Mother nature herself crack the gem to let the dark spirits out and if they do that it’ll be a regular summer night for mother nature . Let alone the nature queen was planning to take over every forest spreading darkness to beautiful forests and flowers .Taking special gear they set out to hunt the Dark Nature Queen herself walking past the dead bodies of those who never made it they kept on going regardless the consequences of walking into the forest at a bad time. Then out of nowhere a wolf comes out of the shadows and tried to eat Dynex but with extreme speed and stealth Dynex killed the Wolf in a flash and they kept on  going . Obstacle after  obstacle after obstacle and they finally made it with blood spilled everywhere on them and on the floor but finally making it they knew this wasn’t gonna be easy because they’re messing with the dark nature queen herself  as thunder struck the ground This marked the final battle and the last night of  the Dark Nature Queen - Mother Nature ! or will she continue her reign with darkness queen herself ! .
Expand - Entertain  your readers some more! What more does your readers need to know about the problem? Add more interesting dialogue Describe the characters actions and feelings in detail Include language features to support key ideas. Simile Metaphors Onomatopoeia Personification	Thunder strikes , rainfall , hailstorm , nature brings the worst to them all . Using the special katana empowered with the light of day golden and white switching colors . They both had one each . Using the power of light  they both made one clash energy of darkness and light hit each other blowing each other away neither were gonna stop weather darkness would win over the forests or mother nature finally sees the light of day . Giving everything they had The Darkness Nature Queen never cared and made one plan but it would be destructive . And as soon as the final energy wave hit it tried to blow them away but the power was absorbed and made mother nature evolve . They gave it their all but they realized that this soon was not enough they had to use darkness and light together .
Solve How was the problem solved? What happened to the characters? Describe the setting What is the moral of the story?	With light and darkness combined they yelled harder and harder until *Crack* *ROARRR* The dark spirits say as they were exposed out freeing mother nature from the night and with a blast of power she  relieved herself off of darkness forever . With the battle won both Loyz and Dynex fell to the ground with mother nature using her healing powers to bring them back to life. Gazing at mother nature she knew where she was supposed to be in the forests and the skies.Both farewelling her they came back out with their faces shining bright and bodies left with the scars of darkness.