Persuasive Writing Framework #2 - LJ

Persuasive Writing Framework

Persuasive Writing Topic and Task
It is wrong to fight
What do you think? Do you agree or disagree? Are there ideas to support both sides of this topic?
Write to persuade your reader of your ideas.
Think about:
what your reader needs to know about the topic
how you are going to introduce the topic the order of your ideas and how you link them what to include in your summary.


Planning for persuasive writing
Example of persuasive writing
Persuasive writing phrases and sentence starters




Statement


It is wrong to fight

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Introduction:
Introduce the topic by stating your opinion
It is wrong to fight because some fights aren’t even for one single reason  such as drinking.


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Reason #1
1- State your first reason
2 - Support your reason with an example


My most important reason is because some fights occur even when they’re not supposed to because some can happen on late nights and some can happen because of gang wars or something like that ..

I think that because
Some fights on T.V are like U.F.C but they’re a payed respective company so they’re paid to fight . But fights like these have no reason at all . Some of these fights are of late night outs some fights are so severe, It leaves them with blood all over their own body , even broken body parts .

For example,
There was this one guy who one punch killed  another person he didn’t even know and  after the family had just  found out a few days later ,the family was filled with deep sadness and anger  , Also the person killed was a loner but he didn’t care he would always travel .He even made his own 2 surfboards called the “Voyager” . The killer was sentenced to 22 months in jail , But the family feared this wasn’t enough  they either wanted life or at least 8 years in prison. They also feared that he might return and hunt down people  because of this sentence.







Reason #2
1- State your second reason
2 - Support your reason with an example

My Second reason is because there are different types of fights ,
For Example. Mocking Family members/friends,
 No reason at all ,  and  play fighting turns real .
Most fights are caused because when people are way too drunk , they’ll fight someone that they don’t know for no random reason. These aren’t even reasons to fight . Fights are real out of control actually no way near control  once it gets way too far. Fights can accel real quickly and you might involve your family in it and you know what’s weird ?  some people say it .
For example :
 When you involve your family and you say you’ll bring your family and then....
 The next day nothing even happens ! and they don’t even come because they have work ! or the next day or the next .  And after that you might forget that you even wanted to involve your family . But then you wouldn’t really care would you ? . You’d just do it yourself and take “ Care “ of it yourself .






Reason #3
1- State your third reason
2 - Support your reason with an example
My third reason is because fighting can be used for defense if you are in very big trouble in the streets that’s why some people have to learn techniques in school programs or such places like a gym or a boxing training centre  to learn how to defend yourself in a fight when you’ve found yourself cornered  in the street . In the street no one uses fair tactics really , . So you have to stand up for yourself using fighting skills but if you don’t have any skills  well ... you get an alternative ending to death .





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Opinion
Summarise your argument by restating your opinion



My Opinion is that fighting is a fair tactic in life , but it can be used in bad ways although i’ve might have repeated this it needs to be permanent out there to everyone in the world  in families , streets , neighbourhoods  even nightclubs and pubs.


What do I think about this piece of persuasive writing?
I think that it is pretty good and it has a reason on why fighting can be used for good and not for bad . It can be used for defence when you're caught in something you shouldn’t be in somewhere real bad.

Why It Is Okay To Be Different - LJ

It’s ok to be different

• Planning for persuasive writing
• Example of persuasive writing
• Sentence starter chart for persuasive writing

Intro

Introduce the topic by stating your opinion

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I think it is okay to be different because you’d feel like you're talking to yourself because everyone's the same as you . So i agree that it is okay to be different

In my opinion it is okay to be different

Why is it so nice being yourself ?

Because there’s only one of you around here.

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Reason 1:

My first reason is because it’s better to be you other than being someone else because if there was never one you ,everyone would be copying and be looking the same as you.

I think that because Such as doing , Looking , Talking and everything you can do  which would be boring to be the same. If you are yourself and everyone is themselves then you get to know other different people and see who they are by themselves . Because everyone can get to know you properly. For example, you’re playing a rugby game and it’s past both halves of the match and no one has scored a single  try , both teams already know what their planning and what you’re going to do to try and win but getting the score is going to be hard especially cause their all the same.

There would be no point in trying to get a score because you’re all the same in what you think and do in a bad way which would make it boring , making fans leave the game.

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Reason 2

It wouldn’t be much fun to see new people trying to be friends with them because you already know who they are and they already know who you are .No greetings at all to each other ,No jokes or anything. They’d already know what's coming because they're just like you.It’s like you and the stranger are twins  sort of , . Even Gangsters are probably like you .Actually there would no point calling them “Gangsters” , because they are  “ You ” just living in the streets .And you wouldn’t like people being you , .

For Example . Say , people who are like you probably might start getting angry causing fights and people everywhere just start fighting for the same reason because one person stole the exact same cross necklace in gold and the person who stole it already has one until you tell them to stop . And they all listen because you are the actual you , no one else is you.You’re sort of like their King or Queen or something like that.

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Reason 3 :

Winning the lotto , Getting a new car  and noticing a new type of person choose anyone of those the car or the lotto mostly  if you choose one everyone will get it  but noticing a new type of person is out of their league they don’t even know what or who it is. It would be so  weird to them  . That them is you hundreds of you . Say you are that new type of person and they don’t know who you are and what you can do .Or what your gonna do to escape them because you think that they’re gonna kill you but they don’t know who you are and you don’t know who they are.And you never even got to know each other.

Opinion

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I strongly believe that because everyone in the world must have a different personality to others because they were always you so much they never even thought about being themselves.

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What do I think about this piece of persuasive writing? Of Course i like it , It tells on why people should be themselves and never to be others .

OREO Persuasive writing craft

WALT craft our persuasive text.

SC:

• We have used OREO
• We have used full stops and capital letters.
• We have included __ my opinion
• We have included __ adjectives
• We have used __ reasons to support my opinion.
• We have used paragraphs

Paragraph 1:

O What is your opinion about this topic?	I think that people who drop litter in the street are murdering fish.
R What is the reason you have this opinion	The litter goes down the drain to the ocean where it is seen by the sea life.
E Explain more about your reasons. Give facts, consequences.	They wreck the rest of the sea life.
O Opinion. How do you think the problem can be solved?	Not littering and leaving trash in the sea  and not causing problems to the sea.

Paragraph 2:

O What is your opinion about this topic?	They are trying to kill fish with rubbish inside the sea,wrecking their habitat.
R What is the reason you have this opinion	They live in their and they feed their kids with all their food.
E Explain more about your reasons. Give facts, consequences.	they go out all night and day looking for food and not wasting time.
O Opinion. How do you think the problem can be solved?	by not causing pollution,Oil spills, and stuff that can lead to pollution.

Paragraph 2:

O What is your opinion about this topic?	I think the some of the humans want all their fish living  their normal life but some humans still want more fish and the humans will start an argument.
R What is the reason you have this opinion	Because the fish would like to live peacefully without any interruptions.
E Explain more about your reasons. Give facts, consequences.	They would like to be free without  fishermen overfishing.
O Opinion. How do you think the problem can be solved?	Not overfishing because the fish would like to be free of fishing nets.

Conclusion

C Conclusion: Summarise your main point and consequence.

We need to find a way to protect our sea life before more species become extinct.