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Friday, 20 February 2015

My Mum

6 comments:

  1. Hi LJ,
    I like the way you do your background all fancy and that but maybe next time
    make your background darker so everybody can see your writing.

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  2. I like this a very lovely hero, she is kind and you know a mother is good at what a mother does.

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  3. I like this a very lovely hero, she is kind and you know a mother is good at what a mother does.

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  4. Hey LJ it's me sifa I just want to say that to use propra punctuation.

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  5. hi lj Its me ricky :-D I like how you put detail into your writing and detailed why your mums your hero .

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  6. hi lj Its me ricky :-D I like how you put detail into your writing and detailed why your mums your hero .

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