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OREO Persuasive writing craft
WALT craft our persuasive text.
SC:
- We have used OREO
- We have used full stops and capital letters.
- We have included __ my opinion
- We have included __ adjectives
- We have used __ reasons to support my opinion.
- We have used paragraphs
Paragraph 1:
O
What is your opinion about this topic?
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I think that people who drop litter in the street are murdering fish.
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R
What is the reason you have this opinion
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The litter goes down the drain to the ocean where it is seen by the sea life.
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E
Explain more about your reasons. Give facts, consequences.
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They wreck the rest of the sea life.
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O
Opinion. How do you think the problem can be solved?
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Not littering and leaving trash in the sea and not causing problems to the sea.
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Paragraph 2:
O
What is your opinion about this topic?
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They are trying to kill fish with rubbish inside the sea,wrecking their habitat.
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R
What is the reason you have this opinion
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They live in their and they feed their kids with all their food.
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E
Explain more about your reasons. Give facts, consequences.
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they go out all night and day looking for food and not wasting time.
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O
Opinion. How do you think the problem can be solved?
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by not causing pollution,Oil spills, and stuff that can lead to pollution.
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Paragraph 2:
O
What is your opinion about this topic?
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I think the some of the humans want all their fish living their normal life but some humans still want more fish and the humans will start an argument.
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R
What is the reason you have this opinion
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Because the fish would like to live peacefully without any interruptions.
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E
Explain more about your reasons. Give facts, consequences.
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They would like to be free without fishermen overfishing.
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O
Opinion. How do you think the problem can be solved?
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Not overfishing because the fish would like to be free of fishing nets.
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Conclusion
C
Conclusion: Summarise your main point and consequence.
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We need to find a way to protect our sea life before more species become extinct.
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